dreamsingray

Hello there! I have a couple little nitpicks here for you. Life is a miracle. But its also shit. You can try hard as hell to be and do your ...

Hello there! I have just a little nitpick for you I hate going down the street and seeing an abandoned animals just sitting there shaking with fear That should either ...

Hello there! Just two quick little things. First, as the reviewer before me said "ain't" isn't a word. I feel that "isn't" might be a better word. Second, the flow ...

Hello, I have just a few quick nitpicks. It's me Who like a burglar Leaves your house Covered in The velvety softness Of an early morning And the lingering smell ...

Wow. This is a very strongly worded poem. I have a couple corrections though: You can be such a bitch And you know it You don't really give a shit ...

Hi! All I have to say is what a beautiful poem. I thought that it flowed nicely and they rhymes were pretty good. Thanks for explaining him getting cut off ...

Hi! So I really enjoyed the poem and what it's communicating. However, I can't interpret if your use of "lite" instead of "light" is intentional? If so, why is it ...

Hi, so I really liked the poem, only problem for me was the spelling errors and the flow of the rhyme was a little off. Spin spin the potters hand ...

I must agree that the repetition is well done. The one thing that didn't work for me was the stanza- Slight smiles Hide the read reason. Yet they give off ...

Wow! This is a very amusing poem and manages to get its point across without being too, too harsh. What you really need is capitalization and better punctuation, but other ...

Hi so I really liked the poem and I agree that it is very well written for a first person poem. I'd like to point out a few small errors ...