Hi there. Lavvi in to review.
Okay. So. You really might want to focus on the total comprehension of the poem because I didn't understand it at all. It was so awkward, a lot of those sentences. I can barely understand what the concept of the poem was...it was just...bizarre. I'm sorry, but it felt really...uncared for. Like someone just scribbled a bunch of words down on a piece of paper without really thinking.
Yours,
Lavvi
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