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Re: Devotion
Love is often regarded as a rather cliche subject matter unless it is done in a new or unique fashion. Unfortunately this poem, while well-written, is not very original or ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: Interview
I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's unique and I think the way you presented it is great. Incorporating dialogue into your poem makes it really stand out among others. ...
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: Inside of me.
I think that with a little more thought or creative word choices this poem could really become something great. Now don't get me wrong I still like it and think ...
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: Powerful love
This poem is very short and to the point but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It's well-written but overall I believe it could be improved with more creative word ...
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: Broken Clock
This is a truly great poem and I enjoyed reading it. Your style, word choice and moments when you use imagery of the stars and galaxies are amazing. "Do we ...
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: Summer Teardrops
I really like this poem and how the teardrops start off only as puddles and then progress into being able to fill an entire ocean. Your words evoke a lot ...
Jun 24, 2016
