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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Devotion

    Love is often regarded as a rather cliche subject matter unless it is done in a new or unique fashion. Unfortunately this poem, while well-written, is not very original or ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Interview

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's unique and I think the way you presented it is great. Incorporating dialogue into your poem makes it really stand out among others. ...

    Jun 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Inside of me.

    I think that with a little more thought or creative word choices this poem could really become something great. Now don't get me wrong I still like it and think ...

    Jun 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Powerful love

    This poem is very short and to the point but that's not necessarily a bad thing. It's well-written but overall I believe it could be improved with more creative word ...

    Jun 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Broken Clock

    This is a truly great poem and I enjoyed reading it. Your style, word choice and moments when you use imagery of the stars and galaxies are amazing. "Do we ...

    Jun 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Summer Teardrops

    I really like this poem and how the teardrops start off only as puddles and then progress into being able to fill an entire ocean. Your words evoke a lot ...

    Jun 24, 2016


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— T. H. White