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Thanks so much for the grammar corrections and advice on descriptions. Very helpful. (I also had Shadow comment on trying to find Tempest through telepathy, but the sheer number of ...

Thanks for commenting to let me know you read it. (I much prefer people enjoy reading and if reviewing gets in the way of that, don't worry about it.)

Just so you know, Shadow's Rising is all one book with six parts. All of them are available on my profile (under Portfolio), so if you are enjoying reading, I ...

Thanks for the advice

Ah, I didn't understand what you meant. Not sure how I can set the scene better though. Do you have any ideas?

I'm a bit surprised by your comments for this chapter. Your reviews were mostly critical in the past (though that's not necessarily a bad thing) so the positive comments were ...

Wow! Can't believe I had a spelling mistake in my title! Thanks for pointing it out. As for the fight, I probably could have just had the final showdown as ...

Not much to say that I haven't already. (I found another reason why Jarid couldn't go btw. lol) He promised to protect Smolder and he would certainly be putting him ...

I'll definitely add a comment that Airel's fighting ability has improved while Jarid was gone. She's totally the type to train hard no matter what. The build up of Dominic ...

I agree that I should probably mention that they are thinking of Shadow throughout the tournament. (after my last reply I edited chapter 9 to include a mention that finding ...

I never really thought about Smolder and Jarid just taking off. I do think I need to add at least a mention of Jarid updating Smolder about all this though. ...

Thanks for all your comments. I've made some changes so that Smolder is not told initially by the queen but by Jarid. I removed the line that Jarid said about ...

I made it clear in the next chapter, but wanted to keep tension high in this one. Thanks for the advice though.

Thanks for mentioning that part about facial expressions while Jarid is on Brazor's back. To explain briefly, Brazor and Jarid are humans born with a special condition that allows them ...

Thanks so much for the review! As always when you join a story, things can feel a bit chaotic. I liked your tips about being sent to the king is ...