dragonight9

Thanks so much! I was a bit disappointed when nobody reviewed these chapters and I'm so glad you enjoyed reading. Have a great day!

Thanks, I'm always happy to correct a few spelling errors. So glad you enjoyed :)

Thanks! So glad you enjoyed :)

Thanks :) I will probably rewrite the prophecy a few more times before final release but I thought that I could reveal the last part of the prophecy later in ...

I totally love antagonists too! It's so much fun to write a dark and powerful badass character. I have to refine how I use him a bit more but I've ...

Thanks, (this is a reply to both reviews on this chapter) I didn't think of putting the indication of who's thinking before the thought (other than how I indicated Hailstorm's ...

Thanks, I'll definitely see if I can diversify or remove some of those dialogue tags. Not sure how much body language I want to add since this is supposed to ...

Yay! This exactly what I was hoping for. I wanted to write a romance scene while adding a bit more to Shadow's backstory and character. I still have to go ...

I was actually considering doing a short novel about Umbra and the events leading up to the night she met Jarid. But that's a ways off. Anyway I'm so glad ...

Thanks for the review, you always leave great comments on what you're getting from the story and it's very helpful. I also like the change to "prophetic dragonet" since I ...

Thanks for the suggestion. I usually write this out in Word and I actually do have it bolded there but it didn't translate over for some reason. I'll see what ...

Thanks for the review! Yes, these chapters are from Shadow's point of view. I have a lot of editing to do before I post the chapters containing Jarid's point of ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed! You're totally right about the length. I originally wrote this as my first chapter before realising it worked better as a prologue. I hope you ...

Thanks for the review and the suggestions. I might end up adding a bit about how the dragonets are still learning how to fly in the open sky after being ...

I understand now that you've explained it but I wouldn't have just reading through the poem.