dragonight9

Thanks a lot for adding to my knowledge as a writer. My target audience is a bit younger and probably wouldn't feel the dissonance you described but I am glad ...

Thanks for the review, as always. I'm so glad you enjoyed :)

Thanks! This will help a lot with my own brainstorming

Thanks for everything you pointed out. I'll definitely mention edit the double name drop. I also agree about the 'not like other girls' trope but I couldn't find a way ...

I like this take on the stars. It is different and you do a great job of evoking feeling in such a short poem. If I was to make one ...

Thanks so much for the review! I'll definitely get that grammar error fixed. And I'm really glad that the kind of relationship I wanted to show between Simon and Jarid ...

Thanks for the suggestion about how to describe the dragonets. I'll definitely take that into consideration.

So glad you enjoyed, and thanks for all the different parts you pointed out. It really helps me know what to emphasize in the future and gives me ideas for ...

Thanks so much for your review and suggested improvement. I'm so glad to see people enjoyed reading my story. :)

Part 2 is done for now. Each part has 12 chapters plus a chapter in between. Don't worry though, Shadow's story will continue in part 4. I just wanted to ...

Awesome! Good luck.

Thanks so much Kaia! :) If you ever want me to add you back to the list of people I share new updates with just let me know.

Thanks for mentioning the typo. So glad you enjoyed