dragonfphoenix

Knight Dragon, here to review as requested! Technical: On a textual note, starting with a thought in italics, completely separated from its tag, was a little rough to read over. ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Well, today appears to be the day of random references. First I run into a Slendy post, and now this. I know this isn't your ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! First off, I have recently been overdosed with Slender exposure. I hadn't had any real encounters with the game, and then enter college life, circa ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this wonderful review day! Technical: First off, I'd recommend italicizing the "Prologue", and maybe "Annabel" as well. Or, perhaps rewrite it with a colon, ...

Knight Dragon, here to review on this glorious review day! Technical: "Our heroes who had an unpleasant conversation with Dr.Kirchoff had to indulge themselves in his crazy and fanatic idea ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: "I grinned to myself, flexing my wings as I slinked close to the ground, chest pressed close against the ground." While grammatically correct, the ...

Knight Dragon, here to review (sorry it took so long...)! Technical: "She knew what it meant; she had always known since the moment it happened." Just a recommendation here, actually. ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Okay, so I checked Lucrezia's review to make sure I didn't point out the same typos she did. So...moving on. "And chosen hearts did rend." ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! For the technical side of the piece, I didn't find anything grammatically or punctually incorrect. In that regard the piece is fine. What I felt ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: "Rough story idea came to me. And got out of bed to put this down so far. :)" Teenie-weenie technical thing on the formatting. ...

Okay, I'm not going to attempt to answer all the criticism, but I'm going to try to give you as clear on the technical as possible, and then talk about ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: "But I have done nothing at all." That "But" there throws off the flow. It seems to be a protest, but a protest that's ...

My mind reels with all attempts to try to understand where the sarcasm begins and where it ends. If it's even meant as sarcasm in the first place. The title ...

Knight Dragon, here to review! Technical: "I woke to my mother shaking me, "Wake up X, someone's breaking into the apartment and your father told me to get y'all to ...

Knight Dragon, here to review as requested! Technical: "Everything in the office was pristine," That comma should either be a colon or a dash. "It was only natural, that he ...