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Re: Tears for a Wolf
Story removed! No! I will finish my day off with being thouroughly sad because I was not able to read this piece. I hope that your day will have ended ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: McDonalds Man
Well, this was just a redicoulous funny thing (not ment to be seriously funny, just slightly amusing) and I thought that it would be funny if he had no way ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: McDonalds Man
This is just something funny that I thought people would enjoy reading. It comes from my many days of working as a McDonalds employee and seeing all of the fabulous ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Another Day Prolouge
Thanks, WriteWriter for your comment, you made me very happy, and thanks Danny, the second I posted this, I noticed that mistake, too. It's supposed to be 'in' not 'an'...you ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Misunderstood Act 1 Scene 1
Oops! It seems that when I was copying this over from Microsoft to here, I forgot a little segment on the very end. It goes like this: (The Prince screams ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: UnAcceptaBle Part One
Will anyone comment on this?!?!
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: The Pain- Prologue *REVISED*
This is very good and I do like it a lot. I have no problems with it and please PM me when Chapter One is up. Thank you and have ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: bigger meanings - prologue
Eh, it was ok. It was interesting, but not that interesting. Basically, you said one thing over and over: we are ment for something more.
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Life
No matter what, always choose life, because death is never a last resort.
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Loneliness That Kills
There is only one person to save me And that person is myself But what if I don't want to be saved? Think about that, hon. ;)
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Monarch Butterfly [prologue]
It was kinda good, but i dont like the idea of antenna on his head. Also, the wings kinda sound girly and five-year-oldish. Besides that, it is VERY interesting! Keep ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Made In China Prolouge
Thank you all for your replies, and keep them coming! It's terrible, and I basically need to rewrite this whole chapter over again. Just, I couldn't really think of ways ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: When There's No Black or White
The last of the blue moon is DISPLAYED and the thing about the spreadeagled does not sound right. Try just plain-old-spread. And if only the world was not black and ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: A Cold Moon [Chapter One] [Part I]
Oops. sorry, i've never quotted before, and I thouth that I was doing it right. I guess not. Anyway, the parts that were awkward, I'll just Type. "The terrain was ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: In the Shadows
OMG angels! that was SO SO SO good! 1
May 28, 2009