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Re: One More Drink
this is truly complex! it speaks to the bonds that make detachment so difficult, even when it might be self-preserving. sometimes, the self does not outweigh these feelings. humans can ...
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Re: Birthdays Lost
thank you for sharing such a raw piece of your soul with us. from the very first line, your words carried me into a stark, harrowing world; a place where ...
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Re: The Beautiful Decline.
i found myself holding my breath alongside the narrator. the way you’ve crafted the ruins and the shadows feels so vivid, like a dream that starts to blur into a ...
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Re: Starving Artist
prose poetry is so effortless. i love it! your writing captures that tension between pain and creation so powerfully. the way you describe 'art as an expression of feeling' and ...
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Re: vacuum silence
vacuum silence. that's a new one! i love how you play with the idea of breath throughout—how it moves from 'lifeless, unmoving statue' to 'lungs and heart in unison but ...
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Re: forget
what a unique idea! ^v^ the structure of turning each definition into a small vignette gives the word ‘forget’ a new depth, as if each meaning is a fragment of ...
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Re: origami butterflies
oh how cutesy! your poem feels like a quiet confession, like the warmth of a hand reaching out on a cold night. the way you write about the paper butterfly—delicate, ...
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Re: haunting beauty
your poem feels like a midnight stroll, where every step is lit by the quiet glow of the moon. how fitting for the topic at hand. the way you describe ...
Oct 7, 2024
