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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Story Of My Life Chapter 2- Another Baby! - Being Put Together

    This was very good, but it was also kind of short. I think you should try to add more detail and maybe answer these question. What did your aunt look ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Lyrical Re: Turning the Page

    Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review. First off, I thought this was very good and very detailed as well. People like to read all the details, but I noticed something, that ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Astronaut

    Hi Magpie. Dogsrule5 here to review. First of all, this poem was really good, and it put a lot of touch to my heart. I think you are kind of ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Invisible

    This was a good poem. I thought your spelling a grammar were good, also was your punctuation. I didn't notice any major mistakes. Nitpicks. Number 1. I am not sure ...

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom vs safety

    Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review. First off, I really liked your poem. It really tells you about life. Where to start. How about nitpicks. Nitpicks. Number 1. [It's their "job" ...

    May 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review! First off. I thought this book was very interesting and also exciting at the same time. I cant chose a favorite part because I liked ...

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Fall Of Us

    I thought this poem about society was good. You are also correct. The best people can be defeated by the wicked that is surrounding us. Anyway I thought this was ...

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Entranced

    Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review. It was a good poem, but your lines seem to be everywhere. I think you should organize your stanzas to where they each have the ...

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fear of you should, in reality, be love?

    Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review! Nitpicks. First off spelling, grammar, and punctuation. As far as I know I didn't see any mistakes here, but if there are I think you ...

    May 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A work in progress

    I thought this was a good poem. I thought you grammar was great and also was your spelling, and punctuation. I thought all of this was good. I didn't see ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blood Tears

    This was a very good poem. I thought it was beautiful and poetic. I really like it. Grammar: Your grammar was wonderful! Spelling: Your spelling was awesome as well was ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A poem for Mother's Day

    That is so sweet. I think your mom will really like it! This is dogsrule5 here to say a good review! YAY! XD! My mom makes me smile, and makes ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Songbird's Signal

    Hi there, I am here to review! I will start with the nitpicks first. At times I wonder if it's a bad thing, to be a songbird caged. To be ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happiness isn't hard

    This poem was very good and very poetic. I really liked how you said... Happiness isn't hard. I didn't see any mistakes in in spelling or grammar. That rolls along ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Remember

    Hi! First I just want to say how much I loved your poem. It's so poetic and beautiful. It breaks my heart, it really does, to see your hopeless self ...

    May 10, 2014


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