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Re: Story Of My Life Chapter 2- Another Baby! - Being Put Together
This was very good, but it was also kind of short. I think you should try to add more detail and maybe answer these question. What did your aunt look ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Turning the Page
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review. First off, I thought this was very good and very detailed as well. People like to read all the details, but I noticed something, that ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: The Astronaut
Hi Magpie. Dogsrule5 here to review. First of all, this poem was really good, and it put a lot of touch to my heart. I think you are kind of ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Invisible
This was a good poem. I thought your spelling a grammar were good, also was your punctuation. I didn't notice any major mistakes. Nitpicks. Number 1. I am not sure ...
May 16, 2014 -
Re: Freedom vs safety
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review. First off, I really liked your poem. It really tells you about life. Where to start. How about nitpicks. Nitpicks. Number 1. [It's their "job" ...
May 16, 2014 -
Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review! First off. I thought this book was very interesting and also exciting at the same time. I cant chose a favorite part because I liked ...
May 16, 2014 -
Re: The Fall Of Us
I thought this poem about society was good. You are also correct. The best people can be defeated by the wicked that is surrounding us. Anyway I thought this was ...
May 16, 2014 -
Re: Entranced
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review. It was a good poem, but your lines seem to be everywhere. I think you should organize your stanzas to where they each have the ...
May 16, 2014 -
Re: Fear of you should, in reality, be love?
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review! Nitpicks. First off spelling, grammar, and punctuation. As far as I know I didn't see any mistakes here, but if there are I think you ...
May 15, 2014 -
Re: A work in progress
I thought this was a good poem. I thought you grammar was great and also was your spelling, and punctuation. I thought all of this was good. I didn't see ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Blood Tears
This was a very good poem. I thought it was beautiful and poetic. I really like it. Grammar: Your grammar was wonderful! Spelling: Your spelling was awesome as well was ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: A poem for Mother's Day
That is so sweet. I think your mom will really like it! This is dogsrule5 here to say a good review! YAY! XD! My mom makes me smile, and makes ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: A Songbird's Signal
Hi there, I am here to review! I will start with the nitpicks first. At times I wonder if it's a bad thing, to be a songbird caged. To be ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Happiness isn't hard
This poem was very good and very poetic. I really liked how you said... Happiness isn't hard. I didn't see any mistakes in in spelling or grammar. That rolls along ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Remember
Hi! First I just want to say how much I loved your poem. It's so poetic and beautiful. It breaks my heart, it really does, to see your hopeless self ...
May 10, 2014
