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Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Fourteen
This was really good! I really liked it! I can't wait until the next chapter. When are you going to publish the next chapter. Is this series almost over. Just ...
Jun 8, 2014 -
Re: I drew my name in chalk
This poem was very beautiful, poetic, and it touched my heart. It is true, usually when children grow into an adult most of them forget their childhood, but some don't. ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Apart Time
First of all. This was really good. Now where should we start. Ah. Nitpicks. I saw a couple of things. They are mistakes that I think most people make, so ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Phoenix
First of all this is one of the best poems I have ever read. Pheonix's in my opioin are really cool! I wish I could meet one, but they seem ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: How To Train Your Dragon Prologue And Chapter 1- An Addition To The Story *Added flashback for Willowpaw1*
Hi Puppies. Dogsrule5 here to review!!! First of all I found not many mistakes, and if there were nitpicks then you are very smart ot point them out yourself!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Look at Me
This was really good! It was different to me, but I like different. This poem put a touch to my heart. I liked all of it so I can't pull ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Nine
This was really awesome!!!! I really liked what happened. I didn't see any mistakes... besides if there were a couple of nitpicks you are very smart and smart enough to ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
I really liked this book. I cant wait to read the next one!!! First off, I really like the similie you used for when you said your arm was on ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Okay, I'm going to be honest to the nerds out there
Hi Em!! This piece of work was great. I mean I am speechless, it was so good!!! It's true you are a nerd, but even if you are I don't ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Seven
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review! First off, I thought this was one of the best chapters ever!!! I love this series, cause its like awesome!!!! I didn't see any mistakes, ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Sweet girl, Sweet baby,
I love this. It was awesome! It really touches your heart. It's so dramatic, but yet poetic all at the same time. Its really good. Where should we start... Nitpicks. ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Lady Liberty's Legacy Burnt Into Us All
This was very good and very poetic. Nitpicks. Number 1. Keep going, little girl. After you say keep going then a comma. That comma kind of puts a pause in ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: The Way
This is very good and touching. I totally get what you are writing about. I didn't see any major mistakes in your poem. I just have a question about it. ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Lost in a Book
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review! One thing. I don't understand how this can be a poem, because it is just describing a feeling. Other people might mention this, but I ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: picture perfect
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review! First off, I thought this poem was really good, and also very poetic. I didn't notice any big mistakes, but here a few nitpicks. Nitpicks. ...
May 17, 2014
