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Hey, dogs here! Alrighty angus you have a great poem! I really like your imagist writing style that paints a clear idea in the reader. And the blue makes that ...

Hey, Dogs here! So this is a really great idea and i think you are heading in the right direction. The poem has great emotion really telling the reader how ...

Hey, dogs here. So you have a great poem! So funny story, i was reading this and i can over the third line and i read "favourite" and i'm like ...

Ha i can relate to the horrible spelling! Go dyslexia!!!!!!!!!!!! But really nice poem, it flows well and it has a good message. Solly already covered everything i have to ...

Hey, dogs here! So yeah this poem has a lot of potential in it. It is a good topic but firstly you should expand upon this, broaden the understanding for ...

Hey, dogs here. So this poem is great, i hate the winter myself and much prefer the heat of the sun so i can totally relate to this. And just ...

Hey, dogs here. Just i would like to say that this poem is really good! It flows like silk and it's short enough that it doesn't drag it out but ...

Hey, dogs here. And haha oh murtuza and your alliteration. But he is right, this is an excellent poem but with a little bit of work you can make it ...

Hey, dogs here. So i totally agree with Lornydoo that this poem needs more emotion or story line to be in this section. If you want to keep it the ...

Hey, dogs here. First of all this is a very nice poem with lots of potential. I really like how short it is cause i am a big fan of ...

Hey man! Dogs here, i would just like to say that your poem has a great message that everyone should listen to. Also don't even worry about structure or rhyming ...

Heeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyy dogs here! I just read your poem and it is AWSOME! Its short, simple, too the point, and it is very smooth. I think that this is a good ...

Heyyyyyyy dogs here just giving out a couple pointers. Firstly congrats on the awesome poem! Despite that one little spelling error i dare say this is one of the best ...

HO HO!!!! Here's a good poem! Dogs here just with a couple pointers. FIrstly, the metaphors you used are awesome! I especially like it when you say "i can feel ...

Oh yes i truly enjoy this poem hey dogs here just saying its, very simple, gets the point across, flows nicely. I dare say there is really nothing wrong with ...