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Hey there nomad! Dogs here with your review today! Ok, so I like the simplicity of this peace. You stay on topic and leave it short enough that the reader ...

Hello there Franks! Dogs here with your review today. Alrighty this is shaping up to be a good poem, it's a good start and I really do like the beginning ...

Hello Batjoke, Dogs here with your review today. Firstly I think this is a good topic with a lot of potential in it. Being in the college search myself I ...

Hello Eydisey! Dogs here with your review today. Ok... I apologize if I sound harsh in my review, but I don't like dancing around my opinion and I'll get straight ...

Alrighty Magpie, here is your review as requested! To start off you got a wonderful wonderful absolutely MARVELOUS beginning. Thats an extremely out of the ordinary way to start a ...

Hello there capitan! Dogs here with your review as requested. Alright so this looks like it's a good piece, I like some of your description and your idea is really ...

Great start, you are making a small foreshadow to the ending which encourages the reader to read more. I like how her face is framed by her hair, that is ...

"I left my heart rate and breathing grow heavy" This line makes no sense, I think you mean "let" instead of "left." Not sure though. "My eyes began to sting ...

Nice starting line, take out the comma after "sky" though. Dakota as a name for a guy? Interesting, for me at least that usually registers as a girls name. When ...

Hello there Sherlock! Dogs here with your review today :). Alright, I really like the sound of this poem, it has good imagery and description. You do a very good ...

Hello Toneless, Dogs here with your review today! Ok so this is a good poem, I like the emotion that you put into here, although I'm not sure I get ...

Hello Reowine! Dogs here with your review today. Ok so I think you have a good piece shaping up here and I like how it's looking. I like the idea ...

Hello Eydi, Dogs here with your review today. Ok so interesting piece you have here. I think it's a wonderful idea and great start for a good piece of literature. ...

Ok you start off a little odd, I like how Hannah is a little taken aback to why she's just being kicked off.. But I think Vile's reasons are a ...

Hello Kafka! Dogs here with your review, I thought I'd repay the favor. Ok so firstly I think this is a good poem, it has a style that's a little ...