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"He stands in the shadows" Your rhythm is a little off in this line. Try just saying: "standing in the shadows" "they bother him none" Major yowsers! That is so ...

Hello infinity! Dogs here with your review. Ok interesting piece you got going on here, I like the idea of trying to define the life of such a seemingly simple ...

Flower child! Dogs here with your review. It's been a while man :). Ok, to start I am extremely confused as to why you didn't space this like a normal ...

Hello Kriege! Dogs here with your review today. YAY A POEM ABOUT MY TWO FAVORITE THINGS! Dogs and Gays =D (sorry for the terrible jokes). I recently posted a poem ...

Howdy Meggs! Dogs here with your review today. Ok I love that you have re written and re posted this piece. It's much much better and you use far better ...

"fall of crime rate and all but eliminating criminal rings" This line sounds awkward, especially because of the run on. Break it into two different sentences. "almost as a touch ...

Hello Castle! Welcome to YWS, I'm Dogs and I'm here for your review. Ok very interesting piece you wrote here. I like the topic, it's not quite overused and you ...

"Of all shapes and colors" Describe some shapes and colors of these umbrellas. And I really have never seen an umbrella that had a different shape from the usually "umbrella" ...

Hello there Clarity! Dogs here with your review today. Very interesting piece you've written here. I like the idea of elaborating on the topic of stereotyping because it's something that ...

howdy doo Sherlock! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, so good piece you have working out here. Although the flow of your writing can be a little off ...

Hello meggs, Dogs here with your review of the day! Okey dokey, intresting poem you have going on here. Intresting in that it isn't formatted exactly like a poem. You ...

OH MY GOD I WAS SO EXCITED TO READ THIS PIECE! I'm glad you finally posted it :). As always Dogs here with your review. So lets hop to it ...

Hello Kais! Dogs here with your review today. OK great topic to write about, it's emotional and personal to a lot of people. Always traumatic and you describe the situation ...

"I screamed scared stiff by the noise" Should be: I screamed, scared stiff by the noise. Although I would like to see some better imagery other then the boring: "scared ...

Hello my dear niteowl! Dogs here with your review today. Ok I really love how you used a common and slightly overused topic and made it into a magnificent piece ...