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Hello there fortnight! Dogs here with your review. Ok, I think you have a great start to this piece. Although I'm not quite sure why you decided to make everything ...

Hello there Mary! Dogs here with your review. Ok so I like the idea of this piece that your writing, although I think that it doesn't clearly support all the ...

Hello there Clock! Dogs here with your review today. Ok to start I think this piece is just wonderful, I love the imagery you use and your rhythm is excellent. ...

Hello there world! Dogs here with your review today. Ok I love the idea of this piece, you imagery for the most part is excellent, the latter end of your ...

"Bill told her he wanted a divorce" This is an extremely confusing line. Reason being is because you don't clarify who "her" is, I'd assume it's Angie. So to alleviate ...

Hello their Magpie! Dogs here with your review today! Well to start things off this is a good piece, I like the idea of it. Simple yet gets the point ...

"I go up the stairs" Come come now, someone with such wonderful and lovely description as you must be better at wording "i go up" in a more creative and ...

Hello there Yolbyi! Dogs here with your review today! Ok, I really like this philosophy you got going on here. I really think this is an excellent beginning that really ...

Howdy doo Gummy! Dogs here with your review. And yes, your topic is clear as day, I'd quit also if they're people who don't get this. Great poem topic, it ...

Hello there Alex! Dogs here with your review today. Great idea for a poem, I like the sound and theme of it. Because most of the things here are pretty ...

Howdy do Sarra! Dogs here with your review today! Ok, first and foremost WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here and if you ever need some advice ...

Hey there Kafka, Dogs here with your review today! Ok, if I may just start out with a WWOOOOOWWW. This was so beautifully written, you use a perfect balance of ...

"behind her back he grinned" Who is he? Describe the characters better. Ok now I am quite confused because Staj was taking over the operations and then now they end ...

YOU FIEND! YOU HAVE VIOLATED RULE #1 ALWAYS TELL DOGS WHEN YOU POST YOUR NEXT PIECE OF PERFECTION!!!!! :P Bumbling buffoon you. Anywho on to ze review. Great start, way ...

Hello there Stori! Dogs here with your review as requested. Ok, in reference to your previous question about how to make Bax clearer that he's an otter, I have a ...