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  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: For God So Loved The Earth

    Hello there stripe. Dogs here with your review. You have a nice piece here, the rhythm is usually pretty smooth and your writing style is nice. Although there were a ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Sugarcoated Evil

    Hello there story! Dogs here with your review today. To start, I really love some of your word choice and imagery that you use here. It works incredibly well in ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: The Tears Wouldn't Come

    "blowing off the head of the... thing that clung to her" Howdy doo Questio! Dogs here again with your review. To start off I think you have an excellent start, ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tears From Above

    Hello there Demoness! Dogs here with your review. Ok, I think that it's incredibly impressive that you wrote that poem in Swedish (I'm not entirely sure what the language is ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Numb

    Hello there Unknown! Knight Tucker here to save your piece from the dungeons of the greenroom! To start, you have a good poem going on here, a tad bit overused ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: collected observations of the loveless

    Hello there Kafka! Tucker here with your review. Well firstly, congratulations on submitting your piece to the poetry contest, you certainly had a batch of difficult words and your excellent ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: The Millennial Ch. 3 (Pt. 1/2)

    Howdy do Trident! I'm excited to see what you got for us this time =D. As always, Tucker here with your review. Let's dive in shall we? "who was now ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Perfect

    "Too perfect in my mind at least. And there she was" Hello there Ractavia, Dogs here with your review. Ok, I like how you start with the "too perfect" bit ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Retrospect

    Hello there Prometheus! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, I enjoyed reading this piece, it has a nice idea. I think where the poem is strongest is in ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Poem

    Hello there Alex! I still, as always, love your username :3. Anywho Dogs here with your review. Ok, you're walking a fine line in writing this piece. I like the ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Stranded

    Hello there infinity! Dogs here with your review :). First if I may say, congratulations for submitting your work into my poetry contest! As a side note, keep in mind ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dark Side

    Going for the quadruple review here! You know the drill, Dogs here with your review. This is a nice piece, but to start I think you should add some more ...

    Feb 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: When We Give In

    WOO HOO! Three reviews of your lovely works in one day! This is looking up to be a good Sunday :). As always, Dogs here with your review today. I ...

    Feb 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A Poem About Love

    Why hello there Panda! I'm just reviewing everything of yours today :D, Dogs once again with your review. To start, I really really liked this poem, you have such excellent ...

    Feb 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: On the Precipice of Life

    Hello there Panda! (I love your avatar by the way :3) Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, I like this piece, it's a nice idea and it flows ...

    Feb 17, 2013


I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin.
— David Eddings