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Re: For God So Loved The Earth
Hello there stripe. Dogs here with your review. You have a nice piece here, the rhythm is usually pretty smooth and your writing style is nice. Although there were a ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Sugarcoated Evil
Hello there story! Dogs here with your review today. To start, I really love some of your word choice and imagery that you use here. It works incredibly well in ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: The Tears Wouldn't Come
"blowing off the head of the... thing that clung to her" Howdy doo Questio! Dogs here again with your review. To start off I think you have an excellent start, ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Tears From Above
Hello there Demoness! Dogs here with your review. Ok, I think that it's incredibly impressive that you wrote that poem in Swedish (I'm not entirely sure what the language is ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Numb
Hello there Unknown! Knight Tucker here to save your piece from the dungeons of the greenroom! To start, you have a good poem going on here, a tad bit overused ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: collected observations of the loveless
Hello there Kafka! Tucker here with your review. Well firstly, congratulations on submitting your piece to the poetry contest, you certainly had a batch of difficult words and your excellent ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: The Millennial Ch. 3 (Pt. 1/2)
Howdy do Trident! I'm excited to see what you got for us this time =D. As always, Tucker here with your review. Let's dive in shall we? "who was now ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Perfect
"Too perfect in my mind at least. And there she was" Hello there Ractavia, Dogs here with your review. Ok, I like how you start with the "too perfect" bit ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Retrospect
Hello there Prometheus! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, I enjoyed reading this piece, it has a nice idea. I think where the poem is strongest is in ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: A Poem
Hello there Alex! I still, as always, love your username :3. Anywho Dogs here with your review. Ok, you're walking a fine line in writing this piece. I like the ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Stranded
Hello there infinity! Dogs here with your review :). First if I may say, congratulations for submitting your work into my poetry contest! As a side note, keep in mind ...
Feb 18, 2013 -
Re: Dark Side
Going for the quadruple review here! You know the drill, Dogs here with your review. This is a nice piece, but to start I think you should add some more ...
Feb 17, 2013 -
Re: When We Give In
WOO HOO! Three reviews of your lovely works in one day! This is looking up to be a good Sunday :). As always, Dogs here with your review today. I ...
Feb 17, 2013 -
Re: A Poem About Love
Why hello there Panda! I'm just reviewing everything of yours today :D, Dogs once again with your review. To start, I really really liked this poem, you have such excellent ...
Feb 17, 2013 -
Re: On the Precipice of Life
Hello there Panda! (I love your avatar by the way :3) Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, I like this piece, it's a nice idea and it flows ...
Feb 17, 2013
