dianis97

Awww that was sweet. But there was something weird about the last three lines. I really liked it, but I was just wondering why did you write "Mí Corazón" with ...

Hi there! Good one! I totally loved it! You just sucked me in, I really enjoyed it! Nicely done. It was very funny:D Best of luck.

Hey there! Not much to say, as the mistakes are already corrected. I really like it! so nice job, I enjoyed it! Best of luck!

LOL!! It was soo funny. I have to say I loved how you made fun of Light, specially in the first one. HILARIOUS!. Good job!, I also loved that Misa ...

Thanks everyone for the review. They have helped a lot!, I'm going to try to be more careful before publishing my work. And I'll try to make it better....maybe change ...

nicee!! I liked it, but there were things like: conducting a sexual relationship.. its too formal, just say having sex. and the rest..well, I agree with the reviews, like the ...

interesting!! it was a bit short..i agree with Gee, there were a couple of mistakes...but not too many! it's so good!! I really liked it!! awsome job!

Sorry it took me so long to review!...i was traveling Well, this is so much better!...you made really good changes and i really liked it but i still think you ...

LOL I think its sooo funny!, but I find it a bit weird, but anyways I think it was kind of cool, especially edward not remembering bella's name, good job ...

wow, it was really good, I really liked it I thought the beginning was a bit boring tough, I did get hooked up until the second paragraph. The ending was ...

Good job...I really liked it, but I never really expect harry thinking that way about Hermione I like the way ron sounded like him...u know the mate thing also the ...

You really captured the characters very nicely. I'm impressed. I think you should expand this chapter a little more. Add what some of the other cullens are feeling. Like Carlilse ...