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thank you your review was very helpful and hopefully i will improve x

thank you for your helpful review x

thanks x

thank you for your review i am sure it will help me in the future x

thank you very much for the tips i will be practicing more because i need to work a good poem for my gcse. if you want you could message me ...

wow that is awesome! i like the flow of it, but the first lines seem a little off. but really great poem

thank you for the advise :D

thank you x :D

thank you for a great review :D

Thank you for your comment! i really appreciate the feed back. But this is a sonnet so the last two lines are meant to be just two lines because that's ...

Bravo!! That's really great!! I am not a poetry expert but it sounds damn good to me! :P

Thank you for the advise i will be sure to use it. This was my first sonnet for a school thing where we were given a writing frame. But i ...

Thank you so much!! i was really nervous about putting my first piece on and you have really helped!! Thnx again!! :)

WOW! that is really tormentingly great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that's a really awesome poem!!!