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Im very sorry they are so short. I am trying to fix that, but I am glad it was an acton filled piece, for that is what I intended it ...

I do not think this is harsh. I indeed thank you for showing all the things you did not like, liked, and what to fix. Most people i come across ...

That is HILAROUIS!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for your complement Greg!

Oh my gods I didnt even realize this was you until a clicked on it and I read Mikko's response and i was wondering "husband?" Getting back on subject, I ...

If you get to read this comment, take note please. If you loved or liked "Tears of an Angel" i would also like you to find the poem "The Funeral" ...

Thank you. I have one poem that is rather long that was made as a song rather than a poem.

Okay! I will take your advice and your comments and fix it up! Thank you for the comment.

Cool! Your welcome for the idea!

Ohhhh....I want to read more!MORE!!!!!Must read more of this awesomeness! can you continue it?!Please!!!!

This is a very sad part.. I know the feeling when you ask someone to stay, the minute your eyes are closed, or your back is turned, they leave.. You ...

I like it. Very in depth, there is nothing more i can say. Keep writing!

It flows very well. It has a good rhythme to it, and it helps with the thought of freedom as she died, very poetic. Nice detail, i would like to ...

Lol

I love this poem, but i kind of wonder, Who were you thinking of when you made this poem?