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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 41

    Hey there! I've been dying with anticipation for this next chapter, so I'm very glad you updated! I never want the Alexander-focused section to end! So, you broke my heart ...

    Feb 7, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Metamorphosis

    This is really good, wow. Lyrics are really interesting to read even if I can't never seem to think of how to review them. And these words are really good! ...

    Feb 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: nihilist hymn

    Hey! I'm not sure what this poem is supposed to mean exactly, but you have some really good uses of imagery in this. I have to admit that I looked ...

    Feb 4, 2017
  • Other » Narrative, Humor Re: Dear Travel-Weary Parents

    Hey there! Even though this review is kind is short, I hope this helps you a little at least! This was really enjoyable, something I didn't really expect, but I ...

    Feb 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: color

    Wow. This is amazing! I love the way you formattted this, and I really enjoyed being able to follow all of the fragments of your poem from side to side. ...

    Feb 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Coerced Diabetes

    Wow. This is amazing! I love how you formatted this so much! You did such a good job of creating this image of a diabetic. I also really like all ...

    Feb 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 5 Viento Village

    Hey Hikaru! I hope this review helps! So, overall, you have a decent story here. The powers of the characters are pretty interesting, and the storyline's okay. Your characters themselves ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 40

    Hey! Sorry the late review - I've been way too busy with some applications that lead to nothing, but now I'm here! I love getting the backstory on Dr. Nico, ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: mint-like.

    Wow, this is amazing! The format blew me away - I love all of the different little snippets you put in here and how they all link together. I also ...

    Jan 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Progeny: Chapter 39

    Wow. I was completely blown away by this amazingly long chapter! I never saw this coming - and now I get why you've spoken about Alexander just a tad bit ...

    Jan 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 17 (Benny-36)

    Hey there! To begin with, I'm sorry but I haven't read the previous chapters of your story, but this seems really interesting, so one day, hopefully I'll be able to. ...

    Jan 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 38

    Hey there! I love this story of yours so much and yay, another chapter! This chapter was very interesting as it added something I wasn't expecting at all. All of ...

    Jan 5, 2017
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Burning

    Wow this is amazing. I'm awful at reviewing anything non-novel stuff because I'm never sure what to focus on, but since this is so well-written, I'll try to help you. ...

    Jan 3, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 4 Electric Drums

    Hey there! I'm here to get this chapter out of the Green Room on this lovely Review Day! To start off, this has a nice length, but it may be ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Super Mario Bros. Ch. 1

    Hey there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely Review Day to help get this out of the Green Room! Sorry if this review is kind for short ...

    Dec 29, 2016


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