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ROLMFARO God i love you Liz

Well if i'm the Angel then i'll fly to Minnisota *sighs sadly*, if only.

Well iknow this is not about me i'm not an Angel in hell *phew* It's a godo poem yeah good.

I agree it is hard to understand i can't quite put my finger on it, but it seems difficult to understand.

Quite good i read the first and wanted to read the second. Yes loads of bad spelling, but that understandable and i want to read more keep it up

Oh by the way Killer Ewok two things i noticed straight away. It's Evil Armada right and no chat speak on this site and in stories. That all i noticed ...

I agree with TBR this seems forced and has seemed had to pointed out all the mistake.

That was a great poem but the end kinda ruined it.

God i now know how horrible he is how unconsiderate of privacy he is, and i can understand how you hate him so this poem fits perfectly. Also I promise ...

WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol that was different.

Godferry accepts realizing they may be his only ticket out of here "Well now that settled Alexandre replied grinning, you will need to drink this now; it tastes ghastly but ...

That great... lol it how i used to feel about Valantine day i guess. *sigh*

That great, what was the challange again.

Okay i looked at it and if it you Alex who did it, then well done it's a great poem. lol yes it could, yes it could.

Not bad i still prefer fantasy, but this led me on good enough keep it up.