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This poetry you do it's quite heavy handed in cliches. Anyway what i'm going to say is I never see any other type of poetry from you. It seems good ...

Whoa that poem has the most long words i seen in one poem. I agree with concept, but you just tried stuffing too much fancy words in it. It's got ...

This book i couldn't stand neither could my cousin. Her and me both couldn't finish it, it just seemed i don't know? I just couldn't read it. I think it ...

intimate fragility, shared, living on whispers: the waves crash against a battered hull, we ride like Jason through the crashing isles, our dove losing more than few feathers, though; the ...

LMAO god this is great Jono i love all. This one i'm not suprised about 6) It will be required by law that all women engage in homosexual behaviour. and ...

You know we're not negative, we just don't lie okay. This site is great, but i see your age and i understand, look that what a critque about your suppouse ...

LMAO heh that funny and it good someone making them look more human. The Germans have had enough punishment. Anyway i like it so is their going to be more, ...

Right erm awolf i'm afraid i agree with Incan. This poem is all cliches. Right i'll help you though now have you just got a girlfriend well if that the ...

If you can't read them try understanding when watching them. Wyrde Sisters and Soul Music. My Dad taped them ages ago. Anyway i've read The Amazing Maurice and his EdUcated ...

Wow this suprised me heh and Xanthan seems to pointed out everything thank you :lots_hearts: :smt055 :smt058 heh i love you so much.

That a good story, nothing much happened but it sucked me in straight away and makes me want too see that CSI epidsoe. Do more of this or another CSI ...

You can tell me how to fix my work when you write it. Thank you, Goodnight She was only trying to help sheesh, and she does write work. Anyway those ...

No your wrong Tropid... JK.Rowling got most of her ideas from Greek mythology and Dementor arn't based on Nazgul if you ask me. Nazgul fight Dementor take away all your ...

Sheesh why winter the time for dying, i guess it's because Spring is the time of renewal; and well. Oh i don't know i'm going ot try and write a ...

:oops: :oops: :oops: Whoa that about me you said, god i love you Liz. :D