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Greetings, fellow author! (I am typing this on my laptop and it's quite late so excuse any typos) This is an interesting continuation of the first chapter, and I believe ...

Greetings, fellow author! (Who has requested my services, yet my calling card requires the vaguery) Firstly, good chapter, very, very interesting chapter. Quite the beautiful concept, sci-fantasy, wit

Greetings, fellow author! (I like saying this a lot.) I appreciate a good enjambment every now and then. A good ol' soliloquy (although this is more of something else, a ...

Greetings, fellow author! I must say I have enjoyed reading through your little piece of nature. The poetic discourse had a simple elegance to it, although at times there were ...

Greetings, fellow author! Let me begin by praising your minimalist style. It's reminiscent of German expressionism, with all the vitality and the creative impetus, and that movement was filled with ...

Hi there fellow new author! To start, if you want to insert stanza breaks you ought to press Return/Enter twice on either mobile or PC. One press creates a new ...

Greetings, dear writer! I will begin my review by commending your choice of inspiration. J.D. Salinger is a household name and his writing style is, in my opinion, one of ...

Greetings, fellow author! Allow me to commend you for choosing the non-Hugo path of describing warfare. Hugo regarded war as a generator of energies, a mystifying force that is pure ...

Greetings, felow author! I'm here to review this wondrous poem that, judging by your publishing history, is part of another universe. The very first thing that struck me was the ...

Hello there, lovely author! I will begin by commending your style. It is extremely concise, and it carries forward the post-modernist, contemporary simplicity that current day poets employ. It's not ...

Hello lovely author of this lovely story! In the words of a famous person whose name I keep forgetting, let's start with the beginning. I loved this short piece, although ...

Greetings, Kazumi! (Using a name here feels odd for me, but I'll power through it) I'm here to write this half-review, half-return commentary on your essay. A punnier person would ...

Hello there, dear author and welcome! Allow me to be the first to review this piece of work you've got here (I do take my sweet time writing this, so ...

Hello there, dear author! I will begin by saying that I believe that this poem would've benefitted from enjambment, especially given its personal and soliloquial nature. However, that's just my ...

Greetings, dear author! I will begin by saying that I thoroughly enjoy free-form poems like this, that even though apparently disheveled carry a dissonant musicality to them. It's hard to ...