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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: The Fox

    I'm sorry, but when I heard that song I thought the same thing as your character. "Foxes yip. THEY YIP!" This was really creative, I have to say. I've personally ...

    Nov 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Lost Chances

    Hmmmm..... Two friends in elementary drifted apart as they both grew up, and shockingly, when one is an adult at an University, the other one shows up and stays. Only ...

    Oct 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: London Bridge

    A couple meets in England, gets married during War World II, husband joins the army, dies, the wife gets depression, the end. That's the nutshell. Now for the meaning. The ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A prayer

    I think that this poem is about a person who thought that somebody important was the shining star in their life, then they went away. This brings on memories of ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.

    "...And they are screwed." I love that quote. I honestly do. Truth be told, I thought about it that way to, until I read The School Story. That's when I ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Magician X, Chapter 1:First Semester, First Hell.

    I have to admit, I laughed at the part with breast. And the part where Jake refuses Michelle. That, was something that I would never do in real life. But ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Unknown Resident - Part One

    I was surprised that this doesn't have any reviews. I didn't know you were from England! Hi, there! It's Wholesomereader here to interpret again! I feel as though this will ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My People

    I didn't catch on until I heard the nicknames. It's a cat! Ah hem. First and foremost, welcome to the Young Writers Society! This is a great piece of work. ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: To Wish Upon a Hope

    Wow. This was a bit of a tongue twister. Well, this was well thought. You can tell when somebody actually thought about what they wrote, rather than just going along. ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Find Judy

    Well, this was well thought out. But it should be, '...the rain was coming down to hard.' That was the only sentence that I found that had something wrong. This ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Science, Technology Re: Boredom

    I am crazy. Hehe. Just messing with you. This was put like any other essay, so, I don't know what to say about this piece. I mean... it's an essay. ...

    Aug 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: When Life Gets Boring, Make Moon Cake.

    This sounds like something that I would do, truth be told. Ah, this was funny. Moon cake sounds like a great idea though. Kinda sounds yummy to. I have to ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Going Home

    Well... the autism was a great twist. And, honestly, autistic people hate being touched. They absolutely hate it. So for an autistic person to be accused of rape is wrong. ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Biting Game: Alice's Story.

    Well, I thought that this was a stupid dare game, but when I started to read a little further I thought, "Whoa! Zombies, not teenagers." Ah hem. To do this ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Summer Rain

    Okay... So this is about somebody missing the other person, and when I rained during summer, it reminded them of it, of the good times. The times they ran for ...

    Aug 16, 2013


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