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I love the name idea, it is very original and interesting. Like Dreamer I wonder how Nameless will get on and if there is another one who is nameless. Anyway, ...

Ok, I have added a bit more to it, there is a story behind how she got her name and why she is living with her aunt and uncle, but ...

Thanks heaps. :) I know I have an issue with changing tenses, but never usually catch all of the mistakes, so thanks for pointing them out.

I love it, it is soo sweet. I don't really have anything constructive to say, but I love it how there were all these strands running thru the story - ...

Wow, that was interesting. I totally agree with the other comments, we need more info about Tammy and why she is crazy. But I do like it and want to ...

Thanks for the critiques, I really appreciate it. I have been procrastinating about posting the edited version because I have been making little changes for ages. But here it is, ...

I like it :) It is really easy to read and interesting.

I really liked it, there were some awkward parts but overall it had me interested in the characters and wanting to read more.

Wow, that was really interesting, a little bit cliched and a bit confusing. I did realize that she was her twin, but it was a bit morbid for me :)

I like this, and I agree with most of what Claudette said. There was a sentence that could be rewritten: Her skin was beyond pale; it was white as new ...

Thanks Dream Deep, you've given me a lot to think about and I have also realised that it has to be raining, absolutely pouring with rain. Why? because it has ...

Lol :lol: Very humorous, i enjoyed it a lot :)

Thanks for the positive feedback :)

Its a very interesting concept and I thought you pulled it off quite well though maybe you could develop the characters of Todd and his dad a bit more.