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Hey there, friend! Kekai, here to review some of Machine City for ya. I've never read this far before, so it was cool to do. First of all, I like ...

Hey there, friend! Kekai here to review your story. I remember reading this forever ago, haha. I'm glad you've picked it up again. I always love angst-y zombie stories, especially ...

Hey there! Kekai, here to review. First of all, what an interesting story! I was instantly hooked by the main character and what seemed to be happening in the story. ...

Hey there! Kekai here, to review! Wonderful piece that you have here. I love the imagery and flow that you have in this, and the creatures themselves are wonderfully frightening. ...

Wow. Wow. I really love this poem; your rhyme scheme is fantastic, and your wording seems to be almost perfect. I love how encouraging this is. I truly hope your ...

Hey there! Kekai again. I figured I had better just review the third part of the series as well, seeing as it only has one review and all. Once again, ...

Hey there! Kekai, here to review. First of all, thanks so much for addressing this topic. I really like how you're using this like a whole story, and I look ...

Hey there! Kekai, here to review. I picked up this story because of the name; what a cool word! I wasn't disappointed by what I found inside. Your grammar is ...

Wow. This poem has such spectacular imagery, and such a dark message. I really love your title, and most everything about this poem. However, I would maybe give it a ...

Hey there! Great concept. I really like the message you're sending here, it's quite a deep one. Also, I do quite like the repetition. I feel like it reinforces the ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope that you like it as much as I do. You've got a great concept here. Oftentimes, we forget that we're constantly moving through ...

Wow. This is a great poem. I love things like this. It's really talent when you're able to put such meaning into so little words. If I were to improve ...

Wow, this is so cool! I love a lot of the phrasing in this, and the imagery is really interesting. I especially love the first verse; I feel like it's ...

Hey there, friend! First of all, interesting story you have here. The Shifties are interesting, and I want to know who or what they are. You definitely have me hooked. ...

Hey there! I definitely understand the point of your essay here; a lot of the female protagonists in popular literature today are just /not up to par/ with the male ...