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Hey! Great story! Loved it! Now, I'll get the improvements out of the way first, then get to the stuff I loved about it! First of all, at the beginning, ...

Wow! Very good! Yes, airplanes can be pretty crazy. I can't imagine travelling alone. But I mean, it'd be terrifying if you got off in the wrong country! Especially if ...

Again, such an amazing chapter. I love how it changed point of view from the last one. I also really liked how you described that dying can look beautiful, peaceful. ...

Wow! This first chapter was amazing! It was so well written and really detailed! I loved it! One of my favourite parts is how you describe the shooting scene, as ...

Oh my god, that was amazing! It was so creepy at the beginning and then it just resolved itself with a small sentence at the end! Whew, every things safe! ...

Oh my gosh! That was awesome - I especially love the pun at the end! All in all, this is a great work! Grammar and spelling is perfect, and the ...

Man.. This is really sad. First off, I know how you feel. For years and still I feel closer with my friends and their parents than with my own. Now, ...

woah! Really good! I love how you express rhythm and rhyme in it. It suits the poem really well! I can also see that you thought out this poem a ...

This is good, but really sad. I really like how you describe the guy as very nice, but in reality, he just wants to bring harm onto her. She's lucky ...

I love this! The way you write is just the best! I love all the parts about Mrs. Agwu! We all have or had a teacher like that! The one ...

Oh my gosh. First off, I got to say - wow! Amazing! The suspense never ends! Are you always writing like this? Cause it's awesome. I love the part where ...

Ok, you review mine, I review yours - it won't be as good as yours though! Oh my gosh! I love this! I my head, this poem gave me an ...

Man, this is… amazing. I have a friend - but I won't say her name. I probably have this wrong, but this is about depression and cutting - is it ...