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Hey! I really liked this poem. It carried a flow of deep imagery that really spoke to me. I like how you didn't explicitly explain the poem but rather left ...

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Hey! I really liked this poem. It carried a flow of deep imagery that really spoke to me. I like how you didn't explicitly explain the poem but rather left ...

Hey! I'm sorry if I came across the wrong way; I don't mean to force anything on you, so I apologize for that. I just got a little carried away. ...

Hey! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, I have been finishing up my midterms. I would like to point to Jeremiah 17:9 - "The heart ...

Thank you for your kind response! I would just like to ask, if Jesus Christ is in fact the Son of God and perfect in every way, isn't it a ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I defininetly agree with you on pretty much all of your review. I wrote this over a year maybe I'll edit it some more tomorrow ...

Hi, I am not sure how to fix the broken paragraphs. It looked good and connected in the publishing center.

Wow, what a great poem! This poem seemed very polished and something I would expect to read in a poetry magazine. It flowed very well and the word use, verses, ...

Sorry about the formatting guys, it all looked good in the publishing center. :p

Hey! Thanks for the review. The issue was resolved in this way: they both thought they were better than the other brother, but then they realized they were best together ...

Oh, ha ha....well I think it's a good thing because when the reader can read further into the story than you intended, it shows that the characters and story are ...

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the input!