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Re: La noche
I really liked this it would have been better If I new what La noche meant though... But I really like this even though \I don`t know the meaning!
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Conversation 17
Nothing to say this is great !
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: See Me
I found my old song ive been looking for!
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Them
KEEP WRITING IT . this rocks!
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Silent tears
Thanks PAZEY!! No hard feelings??
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: deleted
You requested I review so here I am . This is a really good poem and ,sorry I don`t nit pick so I have nothing bad to say about it,or ...
Mar 9, 2011 -
Re: See Me
HERE YOU GO
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: This Moment Is Ours
Welcome to YWS this was very good
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Encased by ice
Hello every one I changed my poem around a bit (finally) according to what one reviewer told me.
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Unreal Letters
Empty and chill, the tears come But there is no one to hear Because you are alone With your keyboard As you discover It wasn’t Real. I loved this part
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Everyday Companion
I really liked this but I didn't understand the last stanza .
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: lion&the lamb
What happened to lush green grass??
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: I Hate Him *1*
This is really good I am going to read the whole thing :)
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Love in the rain chapter 4
what the fish is just a thing she says like what the heck or holy cow
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Love in the rain chapter 4
I REALLY NEED SOME REVIEWS PLEASE??
Feb 4, 2011