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I really liked this it would have been better If I new what La noche meant though... But I really like this even though \I don`t know the meaning!

Nothing to say this is great !

I found my old song ive been looking for!

KEEP WRITING IT . this rocks!

Thanks PAZEY!! No hard feelings??

You requested I review so here I am . This is a really good poem and ,sorry I don`t nit pick so I have nothing bad to say about it,or ...

HERE YOU GO

Welcome to YWS this was very good

Hello every one I changed my poem around a bit (finally) according to what one reviewer told me.

Empty and chill, the tears come But there is no one to hear Because you are alone With your keyboard As you discover It wasn’t Real. I loved this part

I really liked this but I didn't understand the last stanza .

What happened to lush green grass??

This is really good I am going to read the whole thing :)

what the fish is just a thing she says like what the heck or holy cow

I REALLY NEED SOME REVIEWS PLEASE??