darko.demark666

Of an icy chandelier sparkling maliciously in the yellow glow , suspended heavily, mightily in midair. This could be in the same verse? Why did you brake it? Of a ...

I give you one nightmare, a mirage and a daydream :arrow: in that order. Windmills Edge I am walking through barren country. my heart IS heavy , with remorse. I ...

Love Me Little, Love Me Long Love me little, love me long, Is the burden of my song. Love that is too hot and strong Burneth soon to waste. Still, ...

Who? Who, threw the rock, that landed, on Jim? The rock, whose jagged edges, instantly, killed him Or did the rock, throw itself, so consumed, with its spite? And is ...

B lack sailed tears are held at bay By armies of smiles during the day, But by night they sneak across the rocks, Balmly accosting to [s]suddenly[/s] abandoned docks. This ...

Welcome to YWS...... ..... .... ... .. . .. ... .... ..... .....sometimes I get carried away... Writers Block My mind, Pinned down, Unable to think, unable to right, Need ...

" I banish you to whence you came from!" Why is this in apostrophes? You got 2 "you." I don't even know if that bothers me... ;) I smile, for ...

Hello, I've been searching for old poems and I found yours with just 1 review....I' ll give a shot: Should I write a love poem Since it's Saint Valentine's day? ...

I I stand here living. I stand here dying. I am walking. Where am I going? I am human. [s]Right?[/s] The proper verse would be: "I am human, right?" but ...

Welcome to YWS... We once were like one, ; ---> : We shared everything. Together, forever, Our love was stuck , but now it's undone. This really pops out of ...

Written when I was 12. VERY messy.XD go on and murder it. My 12 year old self somewhere will understand. ------------------------------- Written down on thin , white snow, thin snow? ...

This'll be quick..everyone said this is great...I share their opinion.. There's only one single candle placed in the middle of the cake and it wants to be consumed. The guests ...

Rated R for dark subject matter, and insinuated rape. Carry me; I want you to carry me on. Take me higher, make me soar. There’s nothing here for me anymore. ...

A Vampire's Touch The Sun shined so very , very bright, It's rays provided such a beautiful sight. We sat on a cliff No comma here... Which overlooked the sea. ...

I wanna fly away to a place never before seen . Why did you inverse that? It works just fine in a normal placement. I wanna be the first there ...