darko.demark666

Dear you You're a part of me You're eating away at All the things that I am 1. Try to begin with: My dearest... 2. What does the 3rd verse ...

Welcome to the YWS. tired no chance of sleep wired so that I cant weep confused the words tumbling in my head anger this life is full of dread hope ...

"Life’s too short, To fear and worry. Don’t take action, With [s] unnecessary [/s] speed. [s]Definitely[/s] don’t race;" I'm sure you can find better word instead of this. no, this ...

The darkness closes in on me. It sounds twisted. Try delete that and see if it fits like that. I call out for you, ...or "I whisper your name" You ...

I made it up at midnight the say before Cristmas eve. In other words: The start of Chrismas Eve. Enjoy! :smt114 :smt111 O Christmas Eve, O Christmas Eve, My favorite ...

I think I need help with the emotion behind this piece... I feel it, but I'm not sure if others will... any ideas? Always spin the same direction, Because they ...

You sure said it wright. I don't know your town. I didn't get a single clue what are you talking about....I know it's about town but still... I have a ...

Interesting dilemma: love and words, or love for words, as fancy dictates such. Both being beautiful as soaring birds, who love flying, I dare say, just as much. But whom ...

The sun’s radiation Paints the sky With bands of purple and red. And electromagnetism Hisses vengefully As pines and firs Dance in the arctic wind, Swaying in the snow. The ...

This is a very, uh, personal kind of poem. Completely true, and yes, another Tourette's poem. FYI: Th involuntary spasm-like actions called tics. Hope you enjoy, but I'm really just ...

It haunts me. They chant in my head, over and over again, like the eerie hiss of a spell being cast. Their voices reach out like thick, lost fog THAT ...

Yes, this will be my first poem. I have a little problem with the structure in the first verse, because the fourth line is too short. I can't think of ...

Sorry is just a word, Five letters, two syllables You told me you were sorry You didn’t mean it. [s] When you told me you were sorry[/s] You are repeating ...

I walk this road, I walk this road. Alone in travels, travels. The light does not show, does not show. I'm escorted to the gallows, gallows. Nice repetition but I ...

If heaven only knows, then what are we to do? When preying to a God, you can't speak to Frost now gathers in, for yuletide to begin. Festivals given nye, ...