darkmindedemo

I like this. It's short and simple. But it didn't make me feel anything, and isn't that the point of poetry? I do like how you have the first line ...

I really like this poem, it shows some really good emotion. "Without you, I'm left with cold air leaving an emptiness, And the same blinding lights last night that are ...

I really like this. The rhyming was really good, you kept the pattern the same. This tells a story, and the story is a sad one. "So without explanation, without ...

I really like this poem. It shows how even if you write out pages of your emotions, if they don't hold value, then they are empty. It also shows that ...

"When you be so strong. But in the end,things go wrong." This is powerful, and this actually happens a lot. Some people are afraid of failure, so they put up ...

Travis is a really lovable character. It's quite sad that he can't date Clara because he is so nice. And I understand that she wanted to get away from her ...

Sorry I'm only doing this to get more points. But I do like how you wrote "I wonder now, did we save you? Or prolonged your death?" because this is ...

"When time pauses, and silence reigns." This is one of my favorite lines in this pom because it is so true. Sleep is the time where you are your true ...

"If you want to fly, I'll be your sky." It's cool how you made this rhyme unintentionally. I really like this because this whole poem is about how you care ...

I really like how you put emotion into this. The line "Goodbye, dearest friend. I pray your eternal rest is sweet." is really powerful. Another line that I like is ...