dante93

Unlike the other comments I have read I did not love this poem. I thought it was okay, but the emotion,to me, in the poem was a bit lacking. It ...

Ha this poem made me laugh, but in a good way. Writing about writer's block is a very ironic topic, but the way you write it pulls off both the ...

I agree with the above comment. This poem cannot be salvaged at all. It is one of those that reeks of teenage angst. The smell is putrid and overbearing. This ...

I found this poem very funny, but in a good way. What I would suggest you do is not keep it as one single stanza. This poem would flow better ...

This poem reminds me of the Existentialist movement. I enjoyed the poem as it was. I don't think you should change anything with this because otherwise the message might change. ...

This poem was excellent. It was a little weird as you said, but overall it was interesting. I like the use of imagery, the aspects of a drifter, a drinker--someone ...

I found this poem excellent. It rivals my own poetry in craft. Beautifully written, and enlightening. I have not read something like that on here in a long time (I ...

I didn't like this poem. It wasn't that it was too heavy as you say. It was just weird. I think this needs heavy editing. Scream… Not to be heard. ...

I actually enjoyed this poem, not because of the topic, but how you wrote it. It was beautifully crafted. I felt the emotions, the sorrow, the anger--everything that this poem ...

I would have to say this poem was not that great. First, because of the title. American Idol is a joke, the voting is rigged somehow because the best singers ...

I see several grammatical errors in this poem as well as some places where the flow could be better. First: I’ve lied to myself. We all do. We all pretend ...

Why can't I be cruel? It's so much fun. Anyway I'm not going to be cruel because I rather enjoyed this poem. Perhaps it is because I know that feeling ...

First, i must say I did not like this poem. To me this does not not even seem like a poem, simply a statement of fact, especially towards the end. ...

I somewhat enjoyed this poem. As said before your voice is interesting, but overall I didn't really find this poem all to amazing. I know you said you just threw ...

I did not really like this poem very much. It seems very bland. The idea is okay, but the way it is written is just...eh. That's all I can say ...