dante93

I agree with Kit, this poem was interesting, but seemed to lack a bit of flow. I enjoyed the whole idea, but you must expand on this idea more. Make ...

This poem was interesting, and I can relate to it, but the specifics that weren't mentioned actually diminish the effectiveness and overall impact of this poem. It was two days ...

I disagree that this poem is pretty good. It is simply there. If it is raw, it is very, very raw. If it is trying to convey the emotions of ...

I agree with the above reviewer, those two lines were a bit confusing, well confusing to most. I understand that the weather around the person in this poem reflects his ...

I really did not like this poem. I tried to be optimistic about it, but it was simply immature. The language was a bit off. It did not flow very ...

I liked this one, unlike another short one i just read and commented on. This, this makes sense. It is very short, has a very strong point, and actually makes ...

Okay, I do not mean to sound rude, or want to sound ignorant, but what exactly is this poem supposed to mean? I've read it five times, and have tried ...

This poem makes me think of the Twilight series and how much I hate it. This poem was good, but I could not get the images of all the horrible ...

I want the Gold, first of all. Second the poem was decent, but it needs a bit more elaboration. I believe poems that deal with the earth, greed, and our ...

This poem was honestly boring. A bit stale for my taste, and very repetitive. If that is was what you were going for good job, but I did not like ...

I actually thought this poem was good. At first I hated it, I'll admit, but by the end I could see the depth in this poem. Yes the theme is ...

I actually enjoyed this piece of poetry. It was very well written, other than no punctuation, but I found that my mind naturally created how it needed to be interpreted. ...

First, the title of the poem does not match the poem itself. Next this poem was not that great. Even for a religious poem this seems a bit too "Hallelujah! ...

Ha. This poem made me laugh, but in a good way. To me this poem was light-hearted, and playful, yet very well written. I understand the frustration with names and ...

I enjoyed this poem. It had everything a poem should have. It had imagery. It had strong emotion, and was solid all through out. The length fit the theme, and ...