dahlia58

I really enjoyed reading this short story. It felt like a convincing winter scene, with a grandmother telling her grandchild a story about a local mountain before bed. I especially ...

This poem was a bit confusing to read, in a good way. It really felt like I was seeing someone's dream. Perhaps this is only because I'm not a good ...

Skye's reaction to her housing burning is...bizarre at the very least. Chris is a lot braver than I thought. I really like the way you wrote this chapter. The action ...

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I feel that this poem is about unrequited love. The woman doesn't seem to know that the man loves her to the point ...

"You are not easy" is the line I like best in this poem. I really enjoyed the way you used the changing seasons to describe scenes in the lovers' life ...

This is a very short scene, so there's not much readers can comment on. But the dialogue between Kaila and her mother seems natural so far. Kaila's mother gives off ...

This kind of incident happens often online. Everyday, actually. It's hard to tell who's safe to be friends with and who's not online, since in person contact usually never happens. ...

Chris' father gives great advice. ^^ Introverts and extroverts have their own ways of socializing and communicating, and he's right when he tells Chris that his only job is to ...

The stanzas of this poem flow really well. And I like the themes of sacrifice and saying farewell addressed here. I especially love the verses, "When all the earth has ...

I love the nature-related imagery used in this poem. The second half stands put to me especially. "Caressing hands" fits the "Affection" title very well.^^ Since this poem is rather ...

Scary! There's tension in this story alright...If "red wine" was your prompt, you wrote this really well. I actually felt scared while reading this. The red wine dripping to the ...

It's good of you to write something based on the fire. That incident should never have happened, but unfortunately, many factories still haven't fixed their appalling safety hazards and policies, ...

"Find something that can help you and others too." That's the best advice I've heard in a while. And like you said, girls aren't made of sugar and spice, at ...

Goodbyes take a while. Some take forever. I won't tell you to move on or be happy, since a loved one's death isn't something that can be forgotten any time ...

This poem is painful to read, in a good way. The speaker's despair and emotional agony are clearly conveyed. I found the line "what is man that he should break ...