curiousvampire

Hey, welcome Shadowlight to YWS, I loved your story. It was great actually. The mistakes you had that Kadee and forestqueen pointed out was the only things that bugged me. ...

Okay first off I loved the title, it left me wondering what exactly the story was about so it practically forced me to press it. Second I love it. It ...

Hey Butterfly, okay I read this and your story seems to be pretty flat,especially the beginning that Zibbie pointed really didn't interest me all that much. And please separate that ...

Hey Kerza, Curious her as always here to review and praise. Woah! This composition was really strong. I loved it * presses the LIKE button.* I like your new Mareck, ...

Okay, your story seems to be going somewhwere and I'll follow you for the ride if you PM when you add more to the story. I agree with the others ...

Hey Curious here, your loyal reviewer you can count on. Okay this chapter was impressive and the sentences was in perfect harmony. My favorite part of the whole thing probably ...

Hey, welcome to YWS hope your enjoying everything it has to offer. I am Curious by the way and will be reviewing you composition today. Okay to start off I ...

Nitpicks Chapter 2 The warmth of the morning Sun woke me up from my sweet dreams. I looked all around and discovered that except for some large crows and some ...

Hey Nikkilow, my name is Curious and I shall be you reviewer today. It was okay, and your piece didn't really have any errors. But what bugged me were the ...

This was so cute and imaginative. I read it to my baby cousins and they enjoyed it to and ordered me to give it a like no matter if I ...

Awsome chapter and I appreciated the history, it really help to understand what's going on a lot better , so thanks. Now errors: they were a few and, but nothing ...

Okay, its longer and you have a few mistakes. Like a few punctuations missing here and there and some other odd bits and ends that need to be fixed. So ...

Hey Shubi, I'm here to review at yous request. Sadly, I'm late and Isha pointed out all you errors already. I wanted to do that :cry: . Oh well I ...

Yahooooooooooo! Its longer now, but you had a few errors here and there. Like: In you you first sentence,instead of sat , its sitting. I saw it twice and they ...

Too me, it really wasn't all that intersting in the beginning, it was pretty much a drawl til like the very end. Again more mistakes, so tiny and miniscule yet ...