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Re: Some Haikus
I love haikus. These ones are great. My favourite one is the last one.
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: If I Were a Bumblebee
I love this poem. It's short and sweet. It is nice to read happy poems on here instead of so many sad/depressing ones. Well done and keep writing! :D
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: No such thing as boundries
Thanks for the reviews guys! :D
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind
Hey! I loved this poem. It's good not to read a depressing/sad poem once in a while. Keep Writing! :)
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Colors
I like this poem. the others have already said the things I would of said.Keep writing! :D
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: White Wall
It's a good poem. The others have said what I would of said. Keep writing! :D
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Red Fox, Snowy Day - Haiku
This is a great poem. I love Haikus. Keep writing!
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Peacocks
all you have to do is to think of ways to 'show, not tell.' I originally wrote this for a science badge on ornithology (the study of birds) so it ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Um, I don't really know what to say. It doesn't end the way you think it will. Good poem. :D
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: The Earth
The Earth is big. The Earth is stong. It's getting weaker, For it won't be long, The idea of saying "For" probably went with the rhythm, but it doesn't fit ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Glance
Nice poem. It flowed well. Keep writing! :D
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: 5 Reasons why Fail is always Fail
One word for this: Weird!
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Stuff
I love this poem! It made me smile. I love random stuff! I can't live without it, LOL. :D
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: The Earth
This is to everyone who said my poem was too short: A poem can be as long or short as the author wants it to be. In fact, the shortest ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: The Earth
I know my poem is really bad (nothing like yours) and I think all the other viewers would agree as well. No poem is bad, in its own way it's ...
Dec 30, 2010
