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WOW! Rather sort(not sure if thats a good thing or a bad thing), hope you don't really think that. :D

I love tis poem! I wish it was still like it was `back then'.

Good message. (Sorry I'm not very good at reveieing work :( )

Good poem. Sorry I'm not very good at reveiwing work. :(

WOW! I love this poem. Keep writing!

Simple and sweet. Very effective. Keep writing! :D

Thanks guys!

You might need to write something other than stuff about Jonny.

Good poem Sweet Moments! Great point. SAVE THE EARTH!! :D

nice avatar! :D

I enjoyed this piece, and dare I say it, Taylor Swift would write a song about a girl like this I loved it, great writing! Keep it up.

Lovely poem and great message. You just need to correct some spelling errors, apart from that nice poem and keep writing. :)

Thats really cool. We've been told our whole lives were going to use math, and you just showed that in a cool way. Keep Writing! couldn't of said it better

You are SOOO obsessed with Jonny!

Wow! Well written. Keep writing. :)