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I don't understand what everyone hates about me. I don't know how anyone can hate you. Why is it that the exact people who are horrible and mean get all ...

Not very helpful review Hi SweetMoments! :D This poem is really good. I hide my fear, in sorry filled eyes. Long lonely lashes, Great discription here. wet from many cries. ...

and whether you want it to be about cupcakes or your favorite band or the end of the world Hey, my username is cupcake! Hehehe. :D

I think this would be better if you worked on the flow and put it into stanzas. Changes are in bold Comments are in bold and fragments from a sentence ...

A short little poem I just put together. I don't often write poetry, but I thought I might give it a try. Hope you like it. I know you're angry ...

mmm...mmm...mhm mmm...mmm...mhm here i am good begining stanza bron through the saddness and the pain here i am torn apart, ripping at the seems just let me go, just let ...

i've been good unlike the other years. I thought that was funny. My one other little thing is the rhyme at the end sounded forced. Besides that, I loved this ...

i enjoyed the lyrics but i wouldn't really class this as a song, i would class this as a poem of some sort if you changed it around this would ...

Love it! Great lyrics. :D :D :D

This was a very good poem! In the last couple of stanzas it got a little depressing though(unless I am deciphering it wrong), I thought it would have a more ...

This is a bit confusing when it gets to the second stanza, like you didn't know exactly what to do next. In the second stanza all of a sudden you ...

"I can Hear The children outside. And as I do, I can remember... I can remember when I was that young. The mere five year old. Spreading Christmas joy with ...