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Re: thebshamfuul triumph of sweet revenge
cool
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: Drowning Via IV
I like it!! The lyrics went GREAT with the music!
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: the first chap. of my novel
Oh! and you say I a bit too much!
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: Paramore!
Paramore is pretty good... I like Flyleaf better...
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: 9 out of 11 ain't bad
Nice! Very funny!
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: Crescent Part Two
Thanks for your critisism.
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: Scissors and Thread Our Hearts Must Be Torn Apart
That's pretty good. Keep 'em coming! I would kind of clearify a few things, but that's just me! :P
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Thoughts
I'm sorry, but BITE ME!!!! Hisssss! :smt074
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: totally revised. piano player that draines soul
cool. watch some of your grammar and punctuation...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: The Fire Within
i like it!
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Real Beauty
Thank you for your critisism. I realize this poem is quite amature, but I am not an extreemly skilled author, nor do I have enough expierence in poetry to write ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Crescent Part One
thank you. this is just a first draft, so it's NOWHERE near perfect. I really didn't notice how Harry Potter-like it was. I don't know whether that's bad or good... ...
Aug 20, 2007 -
Re: Thoughts
thanks
Aug 20, 2007 -
Re: Thoughts
Thank you for the advice.
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Crescent Part One
Thanks for the help! I am updating as we speak! CrewGurl
Aug 17, 2007