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Hard to believe that a 20 year old has so much improper grammer. What the hell is up with the website at the end of it?

I didn't care too much for this. The singing was too boring as well. Try harder next time

It's referring to someone who has a criminal history and in this case someone who has a criminal history because of a sexual crime

Can someone please tell me how to post these without the stupid double spacing..the first time I posted on this site it was fine but now all of a sudden ...

I'm surprised that 22 people read this and only 1 (besides me) responded. I don't understand why people read but don't respond either positive or negative. But this was a ...

A very well balanced song. It was really wonderful reading it and I look forward to reading more work from you.

I didn't send this song looking like this. I don't ever use spaces after each sentence. For some reason this site posted it looking like that.

Your dad should only "let you go" when you turn 18 not at the age of 14..lol

I wonder if you're talking about God in this song. It was an okay song though

Some parts of the song were okay. However, it seemed to be dragging on a bit and I had to force myself to finish it. I like the concept of ...

I liked the lyric, good job. And perhaps it's short it written form but when sung he could always repeat something from the lyric to make it longer.

who's the bad man and what's he going to do?

It would have been better without the instruments that you intend to play in parentheisis. I also don't understand why this was in the rating 18. There's nothing here that ...

Hmm, I did't really like it that much. It was kind of juvenile coming from an 18 year old. Sorry

why is this rated 18?