Published September 24, 2010
This a kind of old song but I think it has some good to it.
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I have to rate everything 18 because of 'profanitive' text that may arouse.
It would have been better without the instruments that you intend to play in parentheisis. I also don't understand why this was in the rating 18. There's nothing here that would warrant such a rating...but oh well.
Hey Jake! I like this formatting. Anyway, The song is pretty good and Wicked added some good stuff to say. So I haven't much to add.... Well I hope you keep writing!
~Ladypurple.
Thanks! I was trying to get the empathic/imagery to the song, the chorus had alot of tweaking so it means alot
Also, just change the formatting, any better?
First off
Knives and jewels-nice title
second off-I suck at reviewing song lyrics, but i'll give it a shot
Your chorus has a bunch of awesome imagery that is super strong and paints a good picture. Really, i have no otherf comments, except maybe you should mark out the verses. Then it's more clear for the reader
~WickedWonder