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Re: Stain on the Sidewalk *Re-edited!!*
I think you should describe a little more about her feelings. The first edition seemed a bit more touching in my opinion. It's good that you're including the history, but ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: A Single Rose
Thank you :) I'm glad you guys liked it and thank you for the reviews. I'll think of adding more description to the characters.
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: "You're a First Rate Geek" (You Belong With Me PARODY) Edit
Haha. Lol. Nice Parody. You made me laugh. :) -Crescent
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Stain on the Sidewalk *Re-edited!!*
uber likes :)
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: Gravity
nice
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: To Live For
The imagery was very nice. I like the way it sounds.
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: couture no more
I don't really understand the poem either. Maybe you can incorporate what you just told us into the poem? -Crescent
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Zero to Hero
Haha. Lol. Nice fictional news report. -Crescent
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: When I Dream
*nods* what she said. You could continue on the pretty imagery. -Crescent
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Why?
I like the questions. I get how you're feeling through them. You're talking about depression and how you can't get your special someone, right? I like the part about the ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Butterfly, Fly
It was really pretty. It made me think of monarch butterflys. *likes* thank you for writing this. It made my day. -Crescent
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: The Neon Sign
*likes*
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Murdered before it lived.
awww... thanks :) Read Tilly by Frank Perretti if you like stuff like this. He explains the feelings the mother feels after better.
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: See Me
I agree with sealegs :)
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: My Funny LIttle Haiku
Haha *likes*
Apr 10, 2010