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Re: Alessandra and Jayden-The car crash
I wrote this because I thought it would be fun to see it from their perspective.But this story doesn%u2019t serve a purpose.Neither does Eddie%u2019s,Enisa%u2019s,Leona%u2019s parents,Eloise%u2019s pa
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Re: Lycidas’ story-Eloise the demented doll woman origin stories
Thank you! Lycidas moves to his Aunt%u2019s house a few days after the accident.
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Re: Freedom
This is intresting,to hear the thoughts of someone who is dying.The feeling of never going to be able to go back to the people you love,the feeling of being disconnected ...
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Re: Enisa’s origin story-From “Eloise-the demented doll woman”
She did search for him,but could never find him.I%u2019ll add this to the story.Thanks for reviewing!
Jan 3, 2022 -
Re: Eddie’s origin story
Thanks for the review! I%u2019ll go edit it.
Dec 29, 2021 -
Re: Happy New Year!
Ah yes,a poem celebrating the New Year! Something we all need after the two previous years that happened with us.I myself can’t wait for 2022.Maybe everything will be under control ...
Dec 29, 2021 -
Re: An Unfinished Tragedy
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Dec 28, 2021
Wow..this poem was really emotional.The painful feeling of knowing that a beautiful love never started is described well over here! I have a question is this (or some of this,anyway) ... -
Re: Emily’s origin story-The second sister
The reason Emily is an angel is because Heaven in this universe looks at what you did in life.The only %u201Cbad thing%u201C Emily did was kill her sister,Eloise. Other than ...
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Re: Extra Christmas tales
These chapters I%u2019m putting in here are actually from other stories I made that I haven%u2019t posted yet.I will post them sometime in the future and then your questions will ...
Dec 27, 2021 -
Re: A Sad Poem of References
I couldn’t decode where the quotes came from,but I think the one about great power coming with great responsibility is from “The Avengers“ and is said by Thor.I could be ...
Dec 25, 2021 -
Re: A Reindeer Adventure
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Dec 23, 2021
Ooooh! Lovely poem to read before Christmas! It was so whimsical and fun,I picture this as a Christmas special.Bernadette and Hershell's friendship was adorable and I loved how you added ... -
Re: I dreamt of nothing
I liked reading this poem,it was a lot to think about.We all ask ourselves what the meaning of life is,what dreams are.It’s a question that will go on for many ...
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Re: Sarah’s story-The last sister
You%u2019re right,Sarah didn%u2019t die from stress just because Eloise killed children. She died worrying about who she should trust.Sarah has always trusted her sisters and to find out that one ...
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Re: An ode to love lost
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Dec 20, 2021
I have enjoyed reading this poem about lost love.We can love so hard,we forget what’s rational.We end up doing things based on that love and it can do more harm ... -
Re: fuel economy
Hmm%u2026well.. not really.
Dec 19, 2021
