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Whoa! She’s far out into the woods now. And she entered a den of wolves! Hopefully all will be well. My favorite part in the story was the rain drops. ...

Ooh I love dark fairytales and this is just *chef’s kiss* beautiful! I like Edith already. She seems like a kind person, but also someone who will do what needs ...

The narrator is fighting for change. Blood runs down their face. A quick wipe and they’re back in. Back in the fight. Ready to fight for what is right. It ...

Beautiful and a bit creepy. I got a better idea of what this story was about as I read further along. Will Soham find peace? Will he be born, in ...

The man burns on the inside. So he burns the woman to extinguish his own flame. He wishes not to face his own feelings and instead takes his anger out ...

Why yes, Paxton, you’re in big trouble, because you don’t try. At all. As for the story, it’s very interesting. I wonder what happened in Paxton’s life to make him ...

It looks like the boy and Quill only have each other. It’s them against the war. What will become of them? Will they be able to stay together? Or will ...

Cool story so far! It seems like Paxton doesn’t want to make an effort to change his life, like he already gave up. Amanda seems to love Paxton and wants ...

Oh man..how is Kim going to get anything done with those kids around? It’s better for Kim to be alone, without the others bothering her. I have one question, though. ...

I really like this extract of a story. I’ll be sure to read the actual story if you post it. I like how you described Paxton getting increasingly angry with ...

Wow! Scary! I don’t think that there was an actual otherworldly monster at all. I think that Bradley may have killed his family and set his house on fire in ...

Whoa…that… was spooky. I didn’t know who was narrating until near the end of the story. Where is Ryan now? In a pyscho ward? Is Ivan there too? Did Ivan ...

I’d thought I’d ought to go and check this story out. I like it! It’s very simple and cute. I like the ending, when Joy and her family are decorating ...

Looks like Susie Z is going to have a lot to deal with. Susie Z is a member of a very powerful family and she was destined to save the ...

Lessons all of humanity could learn. What I liked about this poem was the mention of a ghost in a positive way. Like the friend who is always there for ...