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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Conversations Meant To Be Forgotten

    I like how the subject of the conversation keeps changing, as if years were passing in between them. I also like the jar with the glowing branches. It’s really pretty ...

    Nov 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: Describing the sky

    Funny and cute! There are a lot of poems describing how “blue and beautiful” the sky is, but do people even realize that the sky isn’t always blue? Here are ...

    Nov 8, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Horror Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Eight

    Is there a potential friendship between Kim and Jasmine? Perhaps. And why on Earth would Jasmine take Kim to her house? Shouldn’t she have left Kim for Beatrice to find ...

    Nov 7, 2022
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: Sorrows of the Deep

    This… is beautiful. I take it that everyone is a merperson? Cool! You would like to think of what happens next? Well, you could have the thing show itself to ...

    Nov 6, 2022
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: In the Dark 2/2

    Oh man… this got dark. Why did the protagonist kill Audrey? Was it really Alex the whole time, knowing that something was up? Will Alex and Chris become the smiling ...

    Nov 5, 2022
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: In the Dark 1/2

    What is this place? What is the monster? Why do they go into the dimension if there’s danger? Something happened with Chris’ Mom for sure. Maybe that thing took his ...

    Nov 4, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Buried in the Blue Unknown (2)

    Already Maysi decided that they’re never going home? What? Why? They’re just going to stay in that strange land forever and they’ll never see Sully or anyone else ever again? ...

    Nov 3, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Buried in the Blue Unknown (1)

    And now comes the best part! When Adam and Maysi drift off through a portal to another world! I don’t think that the pool had a drain in the first ...

    Nov 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Mystery / Suspense Re: Pale brightness of the Moon

    How beautiful and sorrowful. The pale brightness of the moon which once brought a calm into the air now only brings fear. The white glow of the hazy moon now ...

    Nov 1, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Horror Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Seven

    WHAT??! Someone screamed?!! Somebody Kim knows, and you’re just going to leave us in cliffhanger like that?!! That’s criminal! (It’s a joke by the way). This brought us more insight ...

    Oct 31, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: that night

    It seems like it’s about one single night that changes everything. The night when truth is revealed. It’s lost love and lonely nights. I liked the dark and romantic tone ...

    Oct 30, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: jupiter wishes

    This poem is so gorgeous. :0 I can see the stars and solar system with the words written in this. It’s like the whole solar system is sparkling. I think ...

    Oct 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Swashbucklers (Prologue)

    Dang. Poor Adam Rivera. :( He’s lost connection with his daughter and he’s teaching a bunch of losers. What a shame… or is it? You said in the blurb that ...

    Oct 28, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Shadows

    Whoa. :0 Spookyyy! I’m excited to read this series. I at first thought that this was going to be horror, because of the title and what I read, but I ...

    Oct 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: a too-hot shower

    The “too-hot” shower, as told in this poem, is the blurred world in which the narrator is forced to hide in because a certain person changed them beyond recognition. Or ...

    Oct 26, 2022


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