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Re: You are you
Hey there, Nargles! Rosie here! I don't have time to launch into a full review right now, but I still wanted to at least leave a comment on here to ...
Mar 5, 2012 - Re: The boogey man Feb 6, 2012
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Re: Prom With My Mom
Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! First off, I'd just like to say that I adore your concept for this piece. It's so cute! I ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Unwanted Rescue
Hello there!! First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. I hope you like it as much as I do! If you've got any questions, ask away; I'm fairly ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Firefly Dance
Hey, Storyweaver! Thanks for your comments. As to the age of my main character, I intended for that to be left to the reader's imagination. While I was writing it, ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Mummy.
This haiku is interesting. Sometimes it's better to express feeling through few words rather than wasting too many words trying to get it right. I really like this poem. Thumbs ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Time For Revolution
This poem is inspiring. I wrote something sort of like this but not nearly as good a while ago, and I only wish it would've turned out as excellent as ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: The Tenant
This story did what good writing should do: it brought me into the story and made me feel like I was right there, watching the whole thing happen. You used ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Friendship
I like it when people include pieces of their own lives in their poems. You've obviously done a lot of that here. Some things are, maybe, on the edge of ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: free
This poem is great! I love its rhythm. I also love how you express what you're writing about; it's understandable but not in-your-face like some poems are. Thumbs up from ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Music is Freedom
Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked what I wrote. It's awesome to have someplace to post my work where I can share it with other writers ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
This story is the bomb! I didn't expect much from it when I first started reading, but, when I read on, it was humorous and interesting. I like the moral ...
Aug 22, 2011
