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Hello there!!! I really like this poem. It's definitely short, but somehow I think that that works with the topic. What you wrote is concise and clear but still paints ...

Hello there! I love this poem. The meaning of it is almost dark but not quite. It's like you're teetering on the edge of staying here in the world and ...

Hello there!! I'm not exactly sure how I feel about this piece. There are some elements that I like and others that I don't. Imagine ten years have passed You ...

Hello there! First off, I love this poem. I find it very relatable to experiences I've had in my own life. It's hard to tell people your feelings when the ...

Hello there!! I genuinely like this piece. It is perfectly at home in the lyrical poetry category as it has an air of repetition. I love the subject of this ...

Hello there!!! I love the idea of this story. I love the whole 'message in a bottle' thing; it's something that's always been charming to me. I mean, I think ...

Hello there! First off, I genuinely like this poem; my favorite part is the overall feeling of it. It comes off feeling just a little bit raw, which I like; ...

Hello there! First off I'd just like to say that your poem made me laugh. I was reading it and I didn't understand what was going on until I read ...

Hello there! First off, just remember that everything I'm writing is simply my opinion. I'm not saying that I'm right, I'm just saying that it's the way I feel. So, ...

Hey there! I like the concept of this poem. I've never liked the way butterflies are captured and displayed because of many of the same emotions you conveyed through your ...

Hello there! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here as much as I do. If I can help you in any way, just let me know ...

Hello there! Nice work on this poem! I like that you kept it down to a few stanzas; it was just long enough to make your point but not long ...

Hello there! I love the idea of this story. I also love certain elements of the way that you executed it. Especially in the first paragraph, the way you wrote ...

Hello there! :) Overall, I like this poem. It's fairly simple but you still managed to slip in some nice little touches that made it feel unique. So, well done ...

Hello there!!! I really like this poem! I love the concept of what you wrote about here. Actually, this poem is quite refreshing, at least to me, especially in the ...