crazybanana505

thx for the advice I am a little rusty for not being on site for like a year or 2

thanks i have gotten way better about at punctuation and grammer soon i'll be posting this book that i have created.

and thanks for the advice

a chromebook is a laptop and this was a story from my fith grade class that i have not edited its the original story.

Thanks!!!!!. I did this for a school writing piece and didn't change a single word from it and I will be creating a STEELMAN 2.0.

Oh and also i tend to write like I talk which is why i have run on sentences

Thanks!!!!! Dylan and Gabe were passengers on the plane that crashed on the island.

your welcome

Ok i will try to work on my puncuation and grammar and thanks for reading the first chapter merry early Christmas.

yeah thanks

this was pretty creative to write about.