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Hello HopelessAbandon, here for a review! I loved this! The premise to your story sounds amazing and the way you chose to introduce your story to the reader is really ...

Hello Vari, here for a review! Even though small and without giving too much information, this is still a good enough vivid read. The scene is well written, for the ...

Hello Whatabook, here for a review! Ok so even though you do say this is a summary I still don't quite get the general idea of you story. It all ...

Hello writer12345, here for a review! Mysterious. That's the feeling I get after reading this chapter. I say this but it has both a good and a bad connotation to ...

Hello Mazuurek, here for a review! This piece is rather life thinking. It makes you wonder and ponder through your own emotions. To think for once about the death of ...

Hello tigeraye, here for a review! Wow, this feels like I just read an episode of Criminal Minds on paper. This man is really twisted and even though there are ...

Hello Chaser, here for a review! First of, is this really a short story? You have no intentions of making it a novel? Because your idea is incredible and rather ...

Hello Firelight, here for a review! Ok so first of, AMAZING! God, this was so much fun! The originality behind it all is rather impressive! I mean, who would ever ...

Hello PancakeandWaffle (yummy! ;)), here for a review! So even though this is small there are a lot of things going on! The scenes change over and over again and ...

Hello Lozrent, here for a review! The premise to your story sounds rather intringuing. A single boy against a crazy cult and a demoniac being is sure to make anyone ...

Hello chhlovebooks, here for a review! So first of I love the fact you used the word mommy as a start of because it immediatly gives an impression and vibe ...

Hello MissGangamash, here for a review! Your short story was real fun to read. I loved the way you used the babe's prespective when mentioning the longing from the woods. ...

Hello skins, here for a review! So with this first chapter and looking to the tittle of the story we don't really get much information about the story itself, for ...

Hi, emmaki! :D This was great! Really great, well written, and even if there's not much action it's still pretty interesting! Lyria is just an adorable character, we can't help ...

Hello blenny! As per request I'm here for a review. First impression: Very impressive and intriguing! I'm used to see Frankenstein only on Tv and movies and I don't recall ...