The Little Werewolf

by MissGangamash

Published January 30, 2016

12+

In Gothic Short Stories

The baby doesn’t belong to them. The mother holds the tiny thing in her arms, it coos and drools and smiles from time to time. The mother thinks it’s because the babe loves her, but it’s just figuring out how to work the muscles in its face.

In the night, the babe doesn’t cry. The father is smug when he sleeps soundly because he is on night-time duty but never gets disturbed. The baby likes the dark, it looks over to the window but the sky is blocked by the curtain. The baby is sad it can’t see the outside. The baby shouldn’t be old enough to develop such a strong feeling for a specific absence. At only a few months old, it should barely know anything but the babe blinks up at the window with longing in its round eyes.

It spits its food down its bib and the mother chastises softly. ‘You must eat, little one, to grow big and strong.’ But the babe scrunches its face and turns away from the incoming choo-choo train of mushed gunk. It doesn’t like the taste. It feels wrong in its mouth.

Laughter erupts when the babe is in the garden. It wiggles in its chair to be free but is bound by restraints. ‘Be careful, little one, can’t have you hurting yourself, can we?’ Laughter turns to tears at its plight. But the dog licks its tears away and the giggles return. Its little fingers run through the soft pelt of the huge animal and it suddenly feels safe. ‘Get away, Mutsy!’ The hound is slapped on its rump and it cowers under the table. ‘Are you okay, little one?’ The babe stares down at the dog, hands grasping and legs wiggling.

Silence returns in the night and the babe struggles for freedom. It pulls itself to its feet and tries to scale the wall of its crib. In its tiny mind it knows that it can do it. Its need to see the night sky is too strong to ignore. But the babe doesn’t know about the camera the mother has installed in its room after weeks and weeks of soundless nights. ‘No, no, no, little one. Lie back down.’ The babe beats its little fists in protest when it is swaddled in its blanket. Its efforts were fruitless.

The mother watches the screen for a moment as she lies in bed, waiting for her babe to fall asleep. But the babe turns and looks straight at the camera, eyes shining like silver coins. The mother shudders at the depth in her babe’s gaze and looks away, now concerned by her own feelings towards her child. The day they had gotten the call about the poor abandoned thing had been the happiest day of her life. The mother couldn’t be a mother and was more than willing to bring home the baby from the wood.

‘Why doesn’t it cry when it’s not with us?’ asks the mother as she watches the babe in the corner of her eye. ‘Isn’t it odd?’

She. Maybe she’s just content.’

The mother frowns at the father and turns back to the babe, staring silently out of the kitchen window. She doesn’t think this is true. In fact, she doesn’t know what to think. It suddenly dawns on her that she feels no connection to her little babe at all.

After a whole day spent together, the mother still worries, sizing her babe up like it is something foreign to her. Blissfully unaware of her torment, the babe giggles as it rolls on the grass with the hound.

‘Full moon tonight,’ says the father.

‘Oh really?’ the mother replies vacantly.

At night she leaves the blankets loose on her babe and watches the screen to see if it tries to climb again. But the hours grow long and soon her eyes droop closed. This is the first night since the baby had arrived that their sleep is disturbed. The hound’s deep, booming barks shake the very foundations of the house. Both the mother and father are out of bed in an instant. But it is pitch black and they are fumbling, running into one another in their terror. A squeal follows- a pained, animal squeal.

Blood covers the hallway and the mother nearly collapses with fear. The body of the hound lies at the foot of the stairwell, oozing red from the tear at its throat.

‘Check the baby,’ the father says to the disorientated mother.

But the babe is gone.

The paw prints marked in the blood are far too big for their hound. The father follows them to the open back door.

He freezes at the sight before him. At the bottom of the garden stands a wolf with its cub. The cub cocks its head and blinks, its silver eyes twinkling. The mother looks out of the bedroom window and gasps. The cub looks up before they flee, bounding over the fence and into the trees.

The baby doesn’t belong to them.

The baby belongs to the wood.

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Solarpen
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Solarpen wrote a review Review · Jun 7, 2016

It was very interesting! I actually felt uncomfortable reading it from the baby's perspective, because I could vividly imagine how they felt to be so close yet so far from where they belonged. A good kind of uncomfortable, though! Glad to see the baby was returned to its real parent.

Very good story. I loved the baby taking comfort in the hound's presence and their silvery eyes. Well put together.

Thank you so much! Yes, it is quite uncomfortable to write/read from the baby's perspective as she cannot express her feelings in a way the parents can understand. It must have been very distressing for her!

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KaiRyu
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KaiRyu wrote a review Review · Jan 31, 2016

1626632 here, also known as LadyRanicorn. This book/ short story is AMAZING!!!:) I love all of the details that you put into this book. My personal favoret part is the fact that the child is a Werewolf and takes place in the woods, or near the woods? I also loved the suspense throughout the story and it I don't really get why the mom put in camras, maybe you could explain her fear of loosing the baby more, to heighten the drama or something. Anyway, keep being awsome! LadyRanicorn out!:)

Thank you for the lovely review! The mother installed a camera 'after weeks and weeks of soundless nights', she just wanted to know why the baby wasn't waking and crying - which is normally what happens.

KaiRyu replied · Feb 1, 2016

You are welcome. Thanks for letting me know why she installed camras.

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cpedro
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cpedro wrote a review Review · Jan 31, 2016

Hello MissGangamash, here for a review!

Your short story was real fun to read. I loved the way you used the babe's prespective when mentioning the longing from the woods. Most of all it was different because nowadays when it comes to shapeshifting and werewolfs it's always with teenagers and these stupid romances between species (as you see I'm not a big fan), so when you use a baby it's rather refreshing and it actually makes me enjoy all the werewolf thing. The way you talk about the baby's feeling of freedom only when he is in the wild is also very well writen and the reader feels the babe's longing as much as the babe itself.

For grammar mistakes there were only two that I noticed.

-'The paw prints marked in (the)x blood are far too...'

-'They baby belongs (in) to the wood(s).' This is more of a suggestion, I think it flows better like this.

Anyways congrats on your little story and hope to see more of you.
Keep writing!

Thank you so much! I've always wanted to write something to do with werewolves but didn't really know how to go about it. Thought I'd try something a bit different haha.

cpedro replied · Jan 31, 2016

And you definitely succeeded! ;)
You're welcome!

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Amabilia
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Amabilia commented Comment · Jan 30, 2016

This is really good! I loved the story plot and how many descriptive words you used without over using them! I did notice that on the last line, you wrote "They" instead of "The". Adding the fact about the eyes was genius! I didn't think the parents had very much of a reaction, though. I can't wait to read more!

Thank you so much! I'm playing around with short stories at the moment, trying to figure out what works. I'm used to writing novels. The parents were just a little stunned, and I worked in that they didn't really have a connection to the baby anyway, that's why the baby is an 'it' instead of a 'she'. I've uploaded a few other short stories like this one on here if you want to check them out :)



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